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I speak in tongues because I cannot breathe your air
Like the moon stripping glory from the sun
I can never give you what you're used to
Feeding on the soil at your feet
Hoping for a chance to kiss your knees

Will my rib cage full of sodden hoarding
Be worthy of your scintillation?
I'm a wooden house
Filled with plastic diamonds in the south
Burning in your gentle heat
Melting on my tarnished knees
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~TheMoorMaiden Aug 14, 2012  Student Writer
Really nice imagery. I like the line: Hoping for a chance to kiss your knees a lot.
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~TheMoorMaiden Aug 14, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome. :)
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~we-were-left-behind Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful, this just paints a lovely picture in my mind. Fantastic work. :)
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:iconanotherforestfire:
thanks so much :]
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:iconmrs-freestar-bul:
The images are striking, absolutely beautiful:clap:
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Mood: Wow! *lantern-rose Jul 28, 2012  Professional Writer
This is just absolutely beautiful! The emotion! The imagery! Beautiful job~
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:iconanotherforestfire:
thank you so much!
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*lantern-rose Aug 4, 2012  Professional Writer
You're welcome! ^^
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