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Under the cedar boughs forming scars against the sky
I found them:  brilliant, ghost-like, humble creatures
Timid like the greying clouds fearful of weeping
Drinking from a hollow in the evergreen

They scattered as they saw me
Leaving a lone shade lying decimated in the earthly compost
Fading like sand pulled flat by the tide
I knew this was how they would come to their end

The waning gibbous cannot guide them home
As there is no return for those forgotten
So they rest and worship the dark crescent cup until she fills again
Thirsting for the stagnant puddles of the evergreen

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they still hold hope in their bellies.

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:iconconcora:
*Concora Jul 25, 2012   Writer
Your beautiful work has been featured in my journal! :heart:
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:iconqueshy:
This is very lovely. I love the fee to it. I don't have any advice to give but I really do like this *favorite*
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!Drakonadyhanie Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can't explain why I like this, but I do. Immensely. One of the few poems I've taken to well on here in a long time, good work :)
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:iconanotherforestfire:
thank you :] I really appreciate that
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:icondrakonadyhanie:
!Drakonadyhanie Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no problem :D
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:iconcontagiouspixie:
~ContagiousPixie Jul 9, 2012  Student Photographer
your muse is blooming ever-brightly, i see. <3
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:iconanotherforestfire:
I suppose it is :] thankfully...it's about time
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