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my bed hangs like cliffs
sharp edges under tide
two pearls, golden lined
on black, she sings me home
raptured, like gnosis
faded on wine
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and you sang
sail to me, sail to me
let me enfold you
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Your poems really make me wish I could write as beautifully as you do :clap:
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:iconanotherforestfire:
no way! you are a really great writer
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:icondoublethefun:
this is entrancing! I absolutely love it
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~anapests-and-ink Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I feel enraptured. The rhythm alone is seductive. Beautiful.
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:iconanotherforestfire:
well thanks very much!
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Mood: Joy `scarletwave Aug 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
Wow, this is honest and seductive. Well done.

Jen
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