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September 18, 2012
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A galloping halo in my head
Hums hymns against hybrid sins
Odd formations on my skin like maps
Leading me astray through sweat sodden paths
Navigated by flesh
A canonical thirst for hands
On hips, they swing open like holy books
A pendulum to cut me in half
Overflowing the brim
Feeling me
Filling me
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:iconmrs-freestar-bul:
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:iconanotherforestfire:
thank you so much!
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:iconstarell:
I love your wordage it feels otherworldly! Very lovely poem!
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*CadenceDiscordia Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this, and I agree with Is-lnds, you do a lot with a little (in an extremely good way).
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:iconis-lnds:
well damn
you do a lot with a little

thats a talent. whichever
way you want to think of it
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:iconanotherforestfire:
well thank you very much! I think I do better with smaller poems, I get carried away when they are long
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:iconis-lnds:
good. thats perfect.
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