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March 4, 2012
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We're proper lovers with miles in-between
Like the devil floating down the river valley
That baptizes in its water
I am not where I would like to be

Like a pagan dance, you tend to inspire
The flirt in your lips, the kiss in your smile
You've got the earth eyes and I've got the sky
This passion: a forest, the anxiety: a fire
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=AzizrianDaoXrak Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just wanted to let you know this fabulous piece has been featured!: [link]

Keep up the beautiful work!
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:iconanotherforestfire:
thank you so much!
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=AzizrianDaoXrak Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Mood: Love *akarra May 13, 2012  Student Writer
The first stanza's image of a ticked off devil stuck in baptized waters is joking and charming. Love it.
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Mood: Love ~trynke May 12, 2012  Student General Artist
What a wonderful work!
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=Sammur-amat May 12, 2012   General Artist
I love how packed with emotion this short piece is. Strange how sometimes when we are fucked up most is when our ideas can surpass us. You're totally on my watchlist from now on, lovely.:heart:
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:iconanotherforestfire:
I completely agree and thanks so much!
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=Sammur-amat May 16, 2012   General Artist
Ah, it is my pleasure entirely! :D
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